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blog! “Pyramid Song”
[Content Note: death, colonialism, racist views, the dog dies.] Carter was dying - that much was clear. Although he didn't believe in "the curse" it seems his body did. He was once a dynamic presence on the world stage and was now reduced to little more than a quivering jelly. He wasn't the first to […]
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) @realcainmosni@mastodon.me.uk@Edent I liked it, although I think you telegraphed the outcome a little early by describing Carter's symptoms. My immediate thought was the suggestion of cause you placed toward the end. And the dream allegory of the future to come just cemented it. A very interesting conjunction, though. And I positively love the sub-text disparaging the colonial explorer mindset.